本站原创SAT写作讲义[考试简介+经典范文+评分标准]
1.简介
2.范文
3.评分标准
25分钟写一篇400个单词的议论文
1.thesis论点
2.example论据
3.reasoning论证三角关系
reasoning
thesis
Example
中文SAT作文题
Prompt(题目)
Excerpt(摘 要):1993年11月16日,一个来自江苏省的农民俞敏洪,成立了北京新东方学校.十几年来,新东方飞速发展,并于2006年9月7日在美国纽约证券交易所成功上市.俞敏洪提出"追求卓越,挑战极限,从绝望中寻找希望,人生终将辉煌！"的校训,要求新东方老师以德为本,RP至上.
Assignment(任务):新东方老师是不是RP很好
SAT作文题1
Assignment
ArepeoplemorelikelytobeproductiveandsuccesulwhentheyignoretheopinionsofothersPlanandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservation.
Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,
orobservations.
Excerpt
Inordertobethemostproductiveandsuccesulpeoplethatwearecapableofbeing,wemustbewillingtoignoretheopinionsofothers.Itisonlywhenwearepletelyindifferenttoothers'opinionsofus—whenwearenotconcernedabouthowothersthinkofus—thatwecanachieveourmostimportantgoals.
SAT作文题2
Assignment
IstherealwaysanotherexplanationoranotherpointofviewPlanandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservation.
Excerpt
Somepeoplebelievethatthereisonlyonefoolproofplan,perfectsolution,orcorrectinterpretation.Butnothingiseverthatsimple.Forbetterorworse,foreveryso-calledfinalanswerthereisanotherwayofseeingthings.Thereisalwaysa"however."
SAT作文题3
Assignment
IsdeceptioneverjustifiedPlanandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservation.
Excerpt
Honestyisimportant,ofcourse,butdeceptioncanactuallymakeiteasierforpeopletogetalong.Inarecentstudy,forexample,oneoutofeveryfouroftheliestoldbyparticipantswastoldsolelyforthebenefitofanotherperson.Infact,mostliesareharmlesssocialuntruthsinwhichpeoplepretendtolikesomeoneorsomethingmorethantheyactuallydo("Yourmuffinsarethebest！").
如何审题
1.decipherthepromptfirst,Assignmentthen,excerpt
2.brainstormexamples
3.decidetheviewpoint
4.plan
structure
detailsoftheexample
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5.writetheessay
6.leesometimetoreview
Onthetopic
Grammarandspelling
Overusedvocabulary
1~4:2mins
5:22mins
takeadeepbreath
6:1mins
范文1
Istherealwaysanotherexplanationoranotherpointofview
Thereisalwaysa"however."Eachsituationhasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks.Inthefieldofmarketfinance,wefindapellingexamplethatsupportsthisthesis.
TheRoaringTwentieswasadecadeduringwhichtheAmericaneconomysawarapidboom.Infact,America'sbullmarkets,suchastheNewYorkStockExchangehadbeesofinanciallyinvitingby1927thatevenAmerica'iddleclasspoureditoneyintoAmerica'inancialforums.Unfortunately,onOctober4,1929theBoomingTwentiescametoanabrupthaltwhentheNewYorkStockExchangecrashed.
Thecrashhadmanynegativeconsequences.Mostnotably,thestockmarketcrashof1929launchedAmericaintotheGreatDepression,atimeofstarvationandunemploymentformillionsofAmericancitizens.Thewidespreadoptimiofthe1920'squicklyturnedintoanalmostsuicidalpessimi.Indeed,theGreatDepressionrepresentsacripplingconsequenceofthestockmarketcrashof1929.
However,FranklinDelanoRooseveltestablishedinstitutionsandregulationstopreventfutureeconomiccatastrophes.CognizantoftheCrash'scauses,suchaspoolcorruption,overpricedstockvalues,andmarginbuying,RooseveltimplementedtheSocialSecurityAct,theFDIC,andstricterruleonitoringcredit.HisaggressivepoliciesnotonlyamelioratedtheunfortableclimateoftheGreatDepression,butalsolaidthegroundworkforasafer,moresuccesuleconomy.
TheAmericanpublicalsorealizedthemanypositiveresultsofthestockmarketcrashof
1929.Inparticular,AmericancitizensnowheanentirelydifferentfiscaloutlookfromtheonetheyhadbeforetheCrash.Speculatorsheproventobemoreprudentandinsightful,astheyoftenresearchmarkettrendsbeforeinvesting.Perhapostimportantly,Americaninvestorsarenotaseasilyswayedbypopularoptimiandeageradvertisement.
Whilethestockmarketcrashof1929wastheembryooftheGreatDepression,theCrashalsosetthefoundationforasoundereconomy.IfwerecognizethegoodandthebadoftheCrash,wearedestinedtomakefewereconomicmistakes.
keywordrepetition
1.benefits,drawbacks
2.boom
3.negativeconsequences
4.institutionsandregulations
5.positiveresults
6.GreatDepression,asoundereconomy
绝对词汇不用论证
always/only/all/ever/best/most/more
SATScoringGuide
Scoreof6
Anessayinthiscategorydemonstratesclearandconsistentmastery,althoughitmayheafewminorerrors.Atypicalessay
effectivelyandinsightfullydevelopsapointofviewontheissueanddemonstratesoutstandingcriticalthinking,usingclearlyappropriateexamples,reasons,andotherevidencetosupportitsposition
example:举例子
reason:讲道理
example:3CPrinciple
critical(international)
creative
concrete
MIT
criticalcreative
concrete
Afrequentobservationamongteachersofwriting(andreadersofexaminationessays)isthatstudentwritersdonotprovideenoughconcreteillustrations.Theyrarelyfeelthatastudentessayhastoomanyfacts.
Whythisessayreceivedascoreof5
Somelapsesinthespecificityofsupportpreventtheresponsefromearningahigherscore.
Therefore,tomeritascoreof6,thisessayneedstoprovideadditionaldetailedevidencetomoreevenlyandinsightfullydevelopthepointofview.
Whythisessayreceivedascoreof5
Althoughthisessayiseffective,inordertomeritascoreof6,thisessayneedstodemonstrateslightlystrongercriticalthinkingbyofferingmoreinsightfuldetailssupportingtheexamplesprovided.
Whythisessayreceivedascoreof4
Tomeritahigherscore,theessayneedstodevelopthepointofviewmoreinsightfullyandevenlybyprovidingfurtherdetailedevidenceassupport.
Whythisessayreceivedascoreof4
Whilethisessayadequatelydevelopsthepointofview,inordertomoreeffectivelydevelopthepositionandachieveahigherscore,theessayneedstoprovidefurtherinsightfulevidence,ratherthansimplyofferingthetwo"examplesofpeopleacplishingdeedsnotforfameormoney."
DoubleNPrinciple
"Apointworthnotingisthatpropernouns(i.e.,thosethatbeginwithcapitalletters)andnumbersareveryconcrete."
DoubleNPrinciple
Name
NumberDoubleNPrinciplefactualerro
iswellanizedandclearlyfocused,demonstratingclearcoherenceandoothprogressionofideas
3T
introduction:tellwhatyouwilltell
body:tellwhatyoutell
conclusion:tellwhatyouhetold
天净沙·秋思马致远枯藤老树昏鸦.小桥流水人家.古道西风瘦马.夕阳西下,
落霞与孤鹜齐飞,秋水共长天一色.忆江南白居易
江南好,风景旧曾谙.日出江花红胜火,春来江水绿如蓝.能不忆江南！
One-exampleStructure七步成章(SevenSteps)Introduction
1thesis
2summarizetheexample
第1段
Thereisalwaysa"however."Eachsituationhasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks.Inthefieldofmarketfinance,wefindapellingexamplethatsupportsthisthesis.
body
31stphase(TS+detail)
42ndphase(TS+detail)
53rdphase(TS+detail)
第2段
TheRoaringTwentieswasadecadeduringwhichtheAmericaneconomysawarapidboom.Infact,America'sbullmarkets,suchastheNewYorkStockExchangehadbeesofinanciallyinvitingby1927thatevenAmerica'iddleclasspoureditoneyintoAmerica'inancialforums.Unfortunately,onOctober4,1929theBoomingTwentiescametoanabrupthaltwhentheNewYorkStockExchangecrashed.
第3段
Thecrashhadmanynegativeconsequences.Mostnotably,thestockmarketcrashof
1929launchedAmericaintotheGreatDepression,atimeofstarvationandunemploymentformillionsofAmericancitizens.Thewidespreadoptimiofthe1920'squicklyturnedintoanalmostsuicidalpessimi.Indeed,theGreatDepressionrepresentsacripplingconsequenceofthestockmarketcrashof1929.
第4段
However,FranklinDelanoRooseveltestablishedinstitutionsandregulationstopreventfutureeconomiccatastrophes.CognizantoftheCrash'scauses,suchaspoolcorruption,overpricedstockvalues,andmarginbuying,RooseveltimplementedtheSocialSecurityAct,theFDIC,andstricterruleonitoringcredit.HisaggressivepoliciesnotonlyamelioratedtheunfortableclimateoftheGreatDepression,butalsolaidthegroundworkforasafer,moresuccesuleconomy.
第5段
TheAmericanpublicalsorealizedthemanypositiveresultsofthestockmarketcrashof1929.Inparticular,AmericancitizensnowheanentirelydifferentfiscaloutlookfromtheonetheyhadbeforetheCrash.Speculatorsheproventobemoreprudentandinsightful,astheyoftenresearchmarkettrendsbeforeinvesting.Perhapostimportantly,Americaninvestorsarenotaseasilyswayedbypopularoptimiandeageradvertisement.
Conclusion
6concludetheexample
7stepfurther(suggestion)
第6段
Whilethestockmarketcrashof1929wastheembryooftheGreatDepression,theCrashalsosetthefoundationforasoundereconomy.IfwerecognizethegoodandthebadoftheCrash,wearedestinedtomakefewereconomicmistakes.
七步成章(SevenSteps)
introduction
body
1凤头
2
3
4猪肚
5
e-raterprogression
coherence:句子连接
progression:段落连接
Paragraph3:crash(顶针)
大肚能容,容天下难容之事
开口便笑,笑世间可笑之人
Paragraph4:however
Paragraph5:alsocoherence
infactnotonly,butalso
suchasinparticular
unfortunatelyas
mostnotablymostimportantly
indeedwhile
exhibitsskillfuluseoflanguage,usingaried,accurate,andaptvocabulary
varied:多样
accurate:准确
apt:活用
variedvocabulary
finance
financially
financial
变化词性
RoaringTwenties
BoomingTwenties
变同义词
accuratevocabulary
Decade/score/halfancentury/threequartersofancentury
bullmarket/bearmarketaptvocabulary
Shemothere.
theAmericaneconomysawarapidboom
amelioratedtheunfortableclimate
theembryooftheGreatDepression
demonstrateeaningfulvarietyinsentencestructure
1.长短句的变化
2.句子开头变化
3.句子结构变化
4.以主动句为主
Weareendeoringtoconstructamoreinclusivesociety.
Wearegoingtomakethiscountryinwhichnooneisleftout.
Wearetryingtomakeeveryoneequal.varietyinsentencestructure
Thereisalwaysa"however."
Eachsituationhasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks.
Inthefieldofmarketfinance,wefindapellingexamplethatsupportsthisthesis.
ireeofmosterrorsingrammar,usage,andmechanicsgrammarandspelling
可数名词(冠词/复数)
主谓一致(三单)
时态一致(过去/现在)
语法书
《实用英语语法》
《无敌英语语法》
《薄冰英语语法》
Scoreof6
1.example
2.structure
3.language
文章结构
两个例子的结构三个例子的结构
3T
introduction:tellwhatyouwilltell
body:tellwhatyoutell
conclusion:tellwhatyouhetold
一个例子的结构
七步成章
1thesis
2summarizetheexample
31stphase(TS+detail)
42ndphase(TS+detail)
53rdphase(TS+detail)
6concludetheexample
7stepfurther(suggestion)
两个例子的结构
Assignment:Arepeoplemorelikelytobeproductiveandsuccesulwhentheyignoretheopinionsofothers
Althoughitisgoodtostandoutandmakeone'sowndecisions,sometimesitisbeneficialtotaketheadviceofothers.WecanseethroughthedemiseofKingLearthatheshouldnotheignoredKent'swarningtonotdisownCordelia.TheignominiousloseofSwedenintheGreatNorthernWaralsodemonstratesthatothersshouldlistentotheiradvisers.
ListeningtohisadviserswouldhesedLearfrommakingapoordecision.InShakespeare'splayKingLear,Leardecidestodividehislandamongsthisthreedaughtersaccordingtohowmucheachdaughterlovedhim.GonerilandRegan,thetwowickeddaughters,exaggeratetheirloveforhim,whileCordelia,theyoungestdaughter,claimstoloveLearonlysomuchasadaughtershouldloveherfather.LearbeeuriouswiththisbluntansweranddisownsCordelia,leingGonerilandReganwiththemostland.Thesetwosisters,whoarethenewrulersofthekingdom,mistreattheirfatheruntilhegoesinsane.IfLearhadonlylistenedtohisadviserKent'swarningnottodivideupthelandthewayhedid,Learwouldnothesufferedsuchamiserablefate.
CharlesXIIofSwedencouldalsoheoidedabadouteofeventsifhehadnotactedsoimpulsivelyintheGreatNorthernWar,whichbeganin1700.Inthisconflict,RussiawenttowarwithSwedenoverafootholdontheBalticSea.Swedenwasthefortowin,anddealtRussiaahumiliatingdefeatattheBattleofNarva.PetertheGreatofRussia,however,tookthisearlylossasawake-upcallandbuiltuphisny.Whilehewasdoingthis,CharlesbecameambitiousandmadethepoordecisiontoinvadePoland,thusdividinghistroopsandresources.Hedidn'tpayanyattentiontohisadvisers,whourgedhimtostaythecourseofthewarhewasalreadyin.SwedenendeduplosingtheentirewarbecauseofCharles'actionsatthefinalBattleofPoltain1721.Charleswouldhesucceededifhehadnotignoredthesuggestionsofothers.
BothLearandCharleadeirrationaldecisionsthatcouldhebeenpreventediftheyhadnotsostubbornlyactedbytheirownintuitionsalone.Inordertosucceedinthisworld,wemustlearntotaketheadviceofothersandappreciatetheadvantagesindoing
so.
Introduction
1.thesis
2.summarizeexampleA
3.summarizeexampleB
1.thesis
Althoughitisgoodtostandoutandmakeone'sowndecisions,sometimesitisbeneficialtotaketheadviceofothers.
2.summarizeexampleA
WecanseethroughthedemiseofKingLearthatheshouldnotheignoredKent'swarningtonotdisownCordelia.
3.summarizeexampleB
TheignominiousloseofSwedenintheGreatNorthernWaralsodemonstratesthatothersshouldlistentotheiradvisers.
Conclusion
1.concludetheexamples
2.stepfurther(suggestion)
1.concludetheexamples
BothLearandCharleadeirrationaldecisionsthatcouldhebeenpreventediftheyhadnotsostubbornlyactedbytheirownintuitionsalone.
2.stepfurther(suggestion)
Inordertosucceedinthisworld,wemustlearntotaketheadviceofothersandappreciatetheadvantagesindoingso.
Body
1.TS
connectexamplewiththesis
Body
3.reasoning
connectexamplewiththesis
TSA
ListeningtohisadviserswouldhesedLearfrommakingapoordecision.reasoningA
IfLearhadonlylistenedtohisadviserKent'swarningnottodivideupthelandthewayhedid,Learwouldnothesufferedsuchamiserablefate.
TSB
CharlesXIIofSwedencouldalsoheoidedabadouteofeventsifhehadnotactedsoimpulsivelyintheGreatNorthernWar,whichbeganin1700.
reasoningB
Charleswouldhesucceededifhehadnotignoredthesuggestionsofothers.Body
2.example
narrative
150words(evenly)
DoubleN(name,number)
InShakespeare'splayKingLear,Leardecidestodividehislandamongsthisthreedaughtersaccordingtohowmucheachdaughterlovedhim.GonerilandRegan,thetwowickeddaughters,exaggeratetheirloveforhim,whileCordelia,theyoungestdaughter,claimstoloveLearonlysomuchasadaughtershouldloveherfather.LearbeeuriouswiththisbluntansweranddisownsCordelia,leingGonerilandReganwiththemostland.Thesetwosisters,whoarethenewrulersofthekingdom,mistreattheirfatheruntilhegoesinsane.
细节
Shakespeare
KingLear
Generil
Reagan
Cordelia
Kent
Inthisconflict,RussiawenttowarwithSwedenoverafootholdontheBalticSea.
Swedenwasthefortowin,anddealtRussiaahumiliatingdefeatattheBattleofNarva.PetertheGreatofRussia,however,tookthisearlylossasawake-upcallandbuiltuphisny.Whilehewasdoingthis,CharlesbecameambitiousandmadethepoordecisiontoinvadePoland,thusdividinghistroopsandresources.Hedidn'tpayanyattentiontohisadvisers,whourgedhimtostaythecourseofthewarhewasalreadyin.SwedenendeduplosingtheentirewarbecauseofCharles'actionsatthefinalBattleofPoltain1721.
细节
GreatNorthernWarin1700
CharlesⅫofSweden
PetertheGreatofRussia
BalticSea
BattleofNarva
Poland
BattleofPoltain1721progression/coherence
also/similarly/besides/moreover/whatiore/furthermore/inaddition/likewise/like
A
Body
TS
examplereasoning
Youaskmewhatmyaimis.Icanansweritinoneword.Itisvictory.Victoryatallcosts,victoryinspiteofallterrors,victoryhoweverlongandhardtheroadmaybe,forwithoutvictory,thereisnosurvival.
---WinstonChurchill
三个例子的结构
Assignment:IsdeceptioneverjustifiedIntroduction
1.thesis
2.summarizeexampleA
3.summarizeexampleB
4.summarizeexampleC
Deceptionissometimesjustified.Whensomeoneistryingtoachieveanend,heorshemustsometimesusedeceptionasameans.Onatleasttwooccasions,theConfederateArmyuseddeceptioninanattempttooverthrowthemorepowerfulUnionArmy.Alsoin
literature,JayGatsbyusesdeceptiontowinoverhistruelove.
Body
TSexamplereasoning
InthefirstmajorbattleoftheCivilWar,TheFirstBattleofBullRun,theConfederateArmygainedaneatvictoryovertheUnionusingdeception.AlthoughtheUnionappearedtobewinningthebattle,GeneralStonewallJacksonwaswaitingwithreservetroops.Infact,hesurprisedtheoverconfidentUnionArmy,anddrovethembackwithhisdelayedattack.HadStonewallJacksonnotuseddeception,theSouthwouldnothewonthatimportantbattleoftheCivilWar.
DeceptionwasactuallyamajorelementintheSouth'soverallwarstrategy.SincetheylackedresourcesandthemanpoweroftheNorth,theyhadtomakeduewithwhattheydidhe---cleverness.TheyusedtacticssuchaiercerebelyellingandfalsereportstomaketheNorthbelievethatthereweremoreConfederatetroopsthanthereactuallywere.GeneralMcClellanoftheNorthoftenhesitatedtotakeactionbecausehewasalwaysconcernedaboutsendinghienintocertaindeath.TheSouth'aadeworkedforsometimeandtheyhadtheUniontrickedoutofattackingthem.
WealsoseethenecessityofdeceptioninF.ScottFitzgerald'sTheGreatGatsbywhentheprotagonistusesthefaadeofhiansionandhispartiestoimpresshislove,Daisy.Tohim,hisonlygoalinloveistowinherover,whichgoaldriveshimtobeewealthyandbuyahugemansion.HeholdshugedrinkingpartieerelyforthesakeofattractingDaisytohislove.Gatsby,however,doesnotfitintohighsociety.HemerelyusesthesethingstoattractDaisy.Tohim,deceptionisnecessary,orelsehecouldnotpursuetrueloveforhimself.
Conclusion
1.concludetheexamples
2.stepfurther(suggestion)Onmanyoccasions,deceptionisnecessary.TheSouthhadtodeceivetheNorth,andGatsby
hadtodeceivehimselfandDaisy.Fordeceptiontobejustifiedtheremustbesomeendthatisnecessarytoachieve.However,deceptionmustheagoodcause.Enron'srecentdeceptionwasunjustified,becausetheirendwastostealandtoembezzle.
TheconfederacywasdefendingitswayoflifeandGatsbywasinpursuitoftruelove.
Althoughdeceptionwasjustifiedinthesecases,mendacityingeneralshouldnotbeencouraged.Lyingandstealingareformsofdeceptionthatlackajustend.Therefore,deceptioncanbesometimesjustified,butatothertimesnot.
文章结构
一个例子的结构
两个例子的结构
三个例子的结构
Scoreof6
1.example
2.structure
3.language
词汇要求
词汇要求
1.书面化(standardwrittenEnglish)
2.准确化(accurate)
3.多样化(varied)
4.活用化(apt)
1.书面化
1.1拼写完整
lab
bike
math
TV
lab→laboratory
bike→bicycle
math→mathematics
TV→television
Writingmakesanexactman.
---FrancisBacon
1.2不用缩写形式
I'm→Iam
don't→donot
can't→
A:cannot
B:cannot
cannot:不可以
cannot:可以不
A:Icannotopenit.
B:Icannotopenit.
e.g.
→forexample
i.e.
→thatistosay
etc.
→andsoon
1.3不用符号
&,---and
$---money
∵---because
∴---so
1.4不用网络用语
ASAP
等于assoonaspossible
2Bornot2B,thatisa
等于Tobeornottobe,thatisaquestion.
2.准确化
2.1拼写准确
方便
convenient
上网方便
heeasyaccesstotheInter
pasttime
pastime
entertainment/recreation/amusement/distraction/fun
nowaday
nowadays
atpresent/currently/recently/inrecentyears/thesedays/today/now
explain
explanation
maintain
maintenance
数字:100以内使用英文
14
fourteen
40
forty
19
nieen
90
niy
第九
ninth
desert
dessert
diary
dairy
2.2用词准确
learnknowledge
gain/develop/accumulate/increase/enlarge/obtain/acquireknowledge
2.3不用生僻单词
reprimand
omnipotent
rambunctious
3.多样化钱
钞票
票子
银子
人民币
老头票
孔方兄
大团结
3.1动词:刺激
stimulate/motivate/inspire/drive/urge/spur
3.2形容词:大
big/huge/great/vast/giant/gigantic/enormous/immense/tremendous/titanic
大
AB
big
tit
titanic
big
3.3名词:计算机
puter
laptop
desktop
上义词
machine
invention
device
修辞
learnedteacher
efficientassistant
machinerylover
4.活用化
Shemothere.
Isitimportanttoquestiontheideasanddecisionsofpeopleinpositionsofauthority
词汇要求
1.书面化(standardwrittenEnglish)
2.准确化(accurate)
3.多样化(varied)
4.活用化(apt)
背单词单词书
背单词的顺序
顺序背词法
逆序背词法
乱序背词法顺序背词法
abandon
放弃
abash
羞愧
abhor
憎恨
abnormal
变态乱序背词法
most:s,1/6~1/5
hard:stcdeip
easy:quvwxyzrandomwordlist背单词的时间
临睡前
早起后背单词的遍数
通常7遍
忘了再背
快速多遍背单词的方法点面结合
点:注意词的深度
面:每天背3个list
点:注意词的深度
sound
等于healthy
parable
等于similar
se
等于except
spring
等于leap
面:每天背3个list
1.冷水刺激法
2.同龄人压力玩命地背单词
HowtoPrepareforSATEssay(P21)
phasetask1通读真题,准备例子2修改例子,练习主体3开头结尾,例子套题4整篇文章,提升速度WritingPlan
phaseessaywordtime1540090mins2540045mins31040025minsHowtoImproveWriting
phasetimetask120minread220mintranslation320minpare
conclusion
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