高考英语作文高分技巧

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逆向思维法是指为实现某一创新或解决某一因常规思路难以解决的问题,而采取反向思维寻求解决问题的方法.在做英语书面表达题时,我们亦可借鉴这种方法,从研究高考对书面表达的要求入手,以及阅卷者的感受,去迎合他们的要求,从而做到有的放矢,以求短时期内取得对书面表达的突破.

我们可以从高考作文的评分标准及阅卷的角度来审视一下对写作的要求,一篇高分书面表达必须具有以下特点:

内容要点齐全,清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证;

准确性高,描述恰当,时态、人称符合文章要求,语法、句法准确无误,结构严谨

标点、格式、大小写亦能正确应用;

连贯性好,衔接语使用恰当,全文结构紧凑;

使用了一些较为复杂的词汇,句式,能体现出较强的语言运用能力;

通过对高考评分标准的研究,我们可能发现高分作文有着共同的优点.我们在平时就要严格遵循书面表达的要求,认真训练,积极发现自己的问题并做出有针对性地改进.

【典例】

Live in Harmony

当前我国政府和人民正努力把我国建设成一个社会关系和谐的国家,具体到学生而言,大部分学生与家长成员以及同学关系的处理上总体是好的,但也存在着一些问题,如果容易发火,与同学吵架,不听从家长和老师的教育等.我校正在调查高三学生与家庭成员和同学老师之间的关系处理情况,你作为高三学生请把以上的情况向学校反映并提出一些改进的意见.

要点如下:1.目前的实际情况:好的方面和不好的方面;2.你个人的改进意见.

注意:1.文章的开头已经给出(不计入总词数); 2.词数:100左右.

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship.

【参考范文】

Live in Harmony

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members, clasates as well as teachers is good. However, there exist some problems. Some students in our grade are easy to lose their temper because of unbearable anxiety and hey study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our clasates. Second, when we are not feeling good, we can chat with our friends, teachers and parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Third, after a day’s hard work, we can relax ourselves by taking some exercise, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on. The most important is to create a harmonious atmosphere around us in order to realize self-harmony.


点评:本篇作者以大见小的写作手法紧密联系实际,清晰的结构,入理的描述,准确的用词,都说明它是一篇不错的范文.

1)内容要点齐全.作者巧妙地分析了周围环境的不和谐现象,并且提出创造和谐氛围的途径,富有见地,富有哲理.作者首先总结出学生与家庭成员以及班级同学在关系处理上总体是好的,但也存在着一些问题并很自然地引出问题所在,然后话锋一转,提出自己的观点:学生应该如何改变这种状况.

2)语言使用准确性高,较好地使用了英语的各种句型,琅琅上口,英语味道浓厚.作为对当前社会问题的论述,时态的把握特别重要,写作时应以一般现在时为主.

3)语言的连贯性强,非常出现地使用了连接词,使全文的结构紧凑,层次清楚,过渡自然.比如使用了如however, what’s worse, generally speaking, in my opinion等连接词,使文章衔接自然、生动.

4)这篇范文较好地使用了较为复杂的词汇和高级句型,并运用了同位语,插入语以及非限制性定语从句,为文章增添了亮点.