突破高考英语作文的妙计

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摘 要:高考中作文占据了25分,英语的四大基本技能就是听、说、读、写.为什么把"写"说在了最后,而为什么也把"写"放在了卷面的最后?因为这是一个压轴的位置,教了十几年的外语,如何让学生们写出好的作文,是我目前要突破的难点.为此,我潜心研究,钻研业务知识,终于,在今年,我对于突破作文有了一些心得.

关 键 词:突破的方法固定用法备考心得

一、请大家欣赏如下的句子:

Eg.Healthisthemostimportantinourlife.

Nothingioreimportantthanhealthinourlife.(better)

Eg.Itisimportantthatwekeepagoodstateofmindwhenfacingachallenge.

Whatcounts/mattersisthatweshouldkeepagoodstateofmindwhenfacingachallenge.(better)

Eg.Theharderyouwork,thegreaterprogressyouwillmake.(better)

Ifyouworkharder,youwillmakegreaterprogress.

Eg.Thejobcanstrengthenmywillpower.Itcanalsobroadenmyhorizons.

Thejobcannotonlystrengthenmywillpowerbutalsobroadenmyhorizons.

Notonlycanthejobstrengthenmywillpowerbutalsobroadenmyhorizons.(better)

Eg.Hegotaddictedtoplayingputergames.Thiadehisparentsdisappointed.

Hegotaddictedtoplayingputergames,whichmadehisparentsdisappointed.(better)

Eg.Thefinalexaminationisdrawingnear.Wedevoteallenergiestopreparingforit.

Withthefinalexaminationdrawingnear,wedevoteallenergiestopreparingforit.(better)

Eg.TaishanislocatedinShandongprovince.Itcoversanareaof500,000squaremeters.

LocatedinShandongprovince,Taishancoversanareaof500,000squaremeters.(better)

TaishanislocatedinShandongprovince,coveringanareaof500,000squaremeters.(better)

Eg.WehetofacethebusylifeinSenior3.

WehenochoicebuttofacethebusylifeinSenior3.(better)

Eg.Iheastrongdesiretobeolunteerinyouranization.(better)

Iwanttobeolunteerinyouranization.

二、突破的方法:

1.使用主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、状语从句.

Eg.Whatisthemostimportantisthat等

Thereasonwhyisthat等

2.使用变化多样的句式,如疑问句、感叹句、祈使句、倒装句、省略句.

Whata/an+adj.+n.+S.+V.!

Howadj./adv.+S.+V.!

Workhardandyou’llmakegreaterprogress.

BynomeanswillIgiveupmydreamsoeasily.

OnlyinthiswaydidIsolvetheproblem.

3.使用非谓语动词、强调句型、强调动词用法,虚拟语气.

Eg.Wewalkedintothecapitalhandinhand,singinganddancing.

Wecameacrossaproblem,causingapauseintheresearch.

等.,leingtheworkhalfdone.

等,makingitdifficultforustofinishthetask.

形式:S.+V等..,doing等

虚拟语气:Without/Butforone’shelp,S+V等.

IfIwereyou,等.等于WereIyou,等.

4.固定用法:tooadj./adv.todo

soadj./adv.that句子

Aslongas等,S+V

Ondoing等,S+V

Adj./n./adv./v.+as+S.+V,主句等

With+sb/sth+doing/done/todo/adj/adv/介词短语

就等而言:intermsofAor等.

考虑:take等intoaccount/consideration

5.衔接语:Tobegin/startwith

Then,next,inaddition,besides,what’ore,

Finally,lastbutnotleast

以上是我的高考英语作文的备考心得,也是我在指导学生写作时总结的突破妙计.其实这种思维大家都有,但是没有成为一种思路,让它能在考试中起到作用,那是因为大家练得少.英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地,一方面大家要分数,但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇.毫不夸张地说,有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文,所以练习是很重要的,要是现在不练而把高考当练习,那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了,到那时就不要说评卷老师不公平,而是应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不领着学生多练几篇.时间都是挤出来的,希望老师指导学生可以挤出时间来练习写作,让学生把自己的英语水平发挥得淋漓尽致.