本站原创【作文要求】
请以“家务”为主线写一篇英语作文.
提示：你经常在家里做哪些家务,有什么样的体会.检测期就快到了,你打算在寒检测为家里做哪些事情呢?字数在80―100字.语句要通顺,意思连贯.【佳作欣赏】学生范文（一）
Everyfamilyhaslotsofhousework,soweallshouldlearntodosome.Ioftentrymybesttohelpmyparentswithhousework.Forexample,Iwashbowlsaftermealseveryday.Besides,Ioftencleanmyroomaswellayparents’.Ifeelveryproudofmyselffordoingthese.BecauseIcannotonlygivemyparentoretimetorestbutalsolearnsomelifeskillsbydoingthis.Ithinkitisgoodforbothmyparentsandme.MyparentsareverysatiiedwithwhatIhedone,whichencourageetogoondoingsomehouseworkasusual.What’ore,Idecidetotrysomenowhouseworkduringthewintervacation,suchascooking,washingclothesandsoon.
教师点评：
文章观点正确,完全符合题目要求.So,forexample,besides,because,what’ore等词的有效运用使文章语意连贯,过渡自然.语言简洁明了,思路清晰.此外,文章还准确地运用复合句“MyparentsareverysatiiedwithwhatIhedone,whichencourageetogoondoingsomehousework”,为文章增色不少.
学生范文（二）
Thereisalotofhouseworkineveryfamily.Anditalwaystakesuslotsoftimetodohousework,soeachoneinthefamilyshouldoffertohelpdealwithit.
Asallthehouseworkinmyfamilyisusuallydonebymymum,Ioftenhelpherdosomeeasyhouseworklikewashingthedishesaftermeals,wateringflowersandsoon.Thoughitseemssimple,itisnoteasytodothemwell.Thiakeeknowhowtiredmymumiseverydaytomakethehousetidyandclean.SoIplantolearntocookmealormyfamilyinordertogivemymummoretimetorelax.教师点评：
文章观点正确,要点齐全,so,as,though,this等词很好地将上下文紧密地连接在一起使文章结构紧凑,逻辑性强.准确运用了从句、被动语态等多种句式结构,如文中的”Asallthehouseworkinmyfamilyisusuallydonebymymum”“Thiakeeknowhowtiredmymumiseverydaytomakethehousetidyandclean.”等,使文章语言丰富,表达方式多样.